feedback pls

[fLY1337]

YouTube - Era of Treachery


i´m pretty new to this :P

be fair with cmt plsand tell me what i can to better :)

[Apocaliptica]

be fair with cmt plsand tell me what i can to better :)

Everything could be better, the clip is way too short, smooth is too short and the frags are boring as hell.

[fLY1337]

as I said I´m new to this shit =)

[soulstar]

Then you should better learn it and not post it here :)

Btw, dont use these models again.

[xDP]

yeah dont use HQ models + what did someone shit on ur screen at 0:16 ?